Mujhaye Mat Batana

Mujhye mat batana
Ki tum ne mujhaye chorne ka iradah kiya tha
To kiyon
Aur kiss wajeh se
Abhi to tumhare bichrne ka dukh bhi kam nahin hua
Abhi to main
Baton ke,wadon ke shehr-e tilismaat men
Ankh par khush gumani ki patti liye
Tu ko peyron ke peeche,darakhton ke jhund
Aur deewar ki pusht par dhooondne men magan hon
Kahin par tumhaari sada aur kahin par tumhari mehak
Mujh par hansney men masroof hai
abhi tak tumhaari hansi se nabrad aazma hon
Aur iss jang men mera hathyaar
Apni wafa par bharosa hai aur kuch nahin
Issye kund karne ki koshish na karna
Mujhaye mat batana....................

Kasi hai cupid ??

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


Mujhaye Mat Batana

Mujhye mat batana
Ki tum ne mujhaye chorne ka iradah kiya tha
To kiyon
Aur kiss wajeh se
Abhi to tumhare bichrne ka dukh bhi kam nahin hua
Abhi to main
Baton ke,wadon ke shehr-e tilismaat men
Ankh par khush gumani ki patti liye
Tu ko peyron ke peeche,darakhton ke jhund
Aur deewar ki pusht par dhooondne men magan hon
Kahin par tumhaari sada aur kahin par tumhari mehak
Mujh par hansney men masroof hai
abhi tak tumhaari hansi se nabrad aazma hon
Aur iss jang men mera hathyaar
Apni wafa par bharosa hai aur kuch nahin
Issye kund karne ki koshish na karna
Mujhaye mat batana....................

Kasi hai cupid ??[/quote]
bahot khoob,........aap ne khood he lika hai naa.....aap ka apna lagta hai

koyee yaad ....app keliye....
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[quote]Originally posted by Cupid





bahot khoob,........aap ne khood he lika hai naa.....aap ka apna lagta hai[/quote]

Nahin yeh mera nahin hai lykin kaash yeh maine hi likha hota it's just too beautiful sometimes I find poetry which reflect me and i like to share it ,it's Parveen Shakir's from her book Khud Kalami haven't you read it ??

[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


koyee yaad ....app keliye....
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wah !! Fantastic !! yeh hai kiss ki shayed maine pehle parhi hai bohat pehle when I just used to read and not collect peotry ??

oh tho ye parvin shakir ka hai.....pir mujey yaad q nahi aya....ajib baat hai...shyed mai buda hogaya hoon.....bahot si baten bool jatha hoon.....aur doosra ye ke mai parvin ko ithna pasand be nahi karta shyed iss liye

aur ye poem.....fakhra batool ki hai....uss ke book CHAND NE BADAL ORR LIYA se

oyeh logo kia ho riya hey ,, hamari badshahi mey Hamre forum pe............... shairi pur bhi kuch post kardia karo Allah ke bando

[quote]Originally posted by insha_ji


oyeh logo kia ho riya hey ,, hamari badshahi mey Hamre forum pe............... shairi pur bhi kuch post kardia karo Allah ke bando[/quote]
unh aap ka shairi hai aur mujhay nazmen zeyadah pasand hain cupid has started just the right thread I 'do' post there at times funny you didn't notice:p

arrey insha bhai.....abi atey hai hum aap ke thread mai......wo tho aap hain ke hum ghareebo pe tawajo nahi kartey:angry

achha yeh kaisi hai abhi abhi yaad aai

Hawaon uss ki gali se guzro to uss ko mera salaam kehna
Mujhaye khabar hai ki mere ghar se
Guzarne wali hawa ka rasta
Tumhare ghar tak nahin gaya hai
Salaam mera tumhare knon se naarsa hai
Main janta hon hai yeh bachpana hai
Magar haqeeqat ko jan kar bhi najn'ne men ajab mazah hai
Hawa se maine yeh phir kaha hai
Guzar rahe haintumhari yaadon ke dam se hi subho shaam kehna
Hawao uss ki gali se guzro to uss ko mera salaam kehna
Hawa ke rukh ki kisse khabar hai
Tumhare ghar ka kissi pata hai..............!

well??????????

aap ko he tu tawajjo dete hain SHAIRI mey or kissy pur nahi dete apko tu behter maloom hona chayeh Cupid

[glow tcolor=BLACK, fcolor=RED, size=3, strength=2]POEM OF THE DAY[/glow]

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very nice cupid nice choice u have:)

hama waqt ranj-o malal kya jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya
use yaad karke na dil dukha jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

na gila kiya na khafa hue yunhi raste me juda hue
na tu bewafa na main bewafa jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

woh ghazal ki aik kitab tha woh gulon me aik gulaab tha
zara der ko koi khwab tha jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

woh udas dhoop samet kar kahin waadiyon me utar chuka
use ab na de mere dil sada jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

yeh safar bhi kitna taweel hai yahan waqt kitna qaleel hai
kahan laut ker koi aayega jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

woh wafayen thin ke jafayen thin yeh na soch kis ki khatayen thin
jo tera hai usko gale laga jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

koi farq shah-o gada nahi ke yahan kisi ki baqa nahi
ye ujaad mahlon ki sun sada jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

tujhe aitbar-o yaqeen nahi nahi dunya itni buri nahi
na malal kar mere saath aa jo guzar gaya woh guzar gaya

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


achha yeh kaisi hai abhi abhi yaad aai

Hawaon uss ki gali se guzro to uss ko mera salaam kehna
Mujhaye khabar hai ki mere ghar se
Guzarne wali hawa ka rasta
Tumhare ghar tak nahin gaya hai
Salaam mera tumhare knon se naarsa hai
Main janta hon hai yeh bachpana hai
Magar haqeeqat ko jan kar bhi najn'ne men ajab mazah hai
Hawa se maine yeh phir kaha hai
Guzar rahe haintumhari yaadon ke dam se hi subho shaam kehna
Hawao uss ki gali se guzro to uss ko mera salaam kehna
Hawa ke rukh ki kisse khabar hai
Tumhare ghar ka kissi pata hai..............!

well??????????[/quote]


bahot achi poem hai

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Kiya Mila Mohabbat say??

khawab ki musaffat say
visal ki tamazaat say
rooz-o-shaab reazaat say

kiya mila mohabbat say?

aik hijr kaa sehra
aik shaam yaadoo ki
aik thaka hoa ansoo..

[quote]Originally posted by Nosheen


Kiya Mila Mohabbat say??

khawab ki musaffat say
visal ki tamazaat say
rooz-o-shaab reazaat say

kiya mila mohabbat say?

aik hijr kaa sehra
aik shaam yaadoo ki
aik thaka hoa ansoo..[/quote]

beautiful------

DER ALA

thanks Cupid...

Zabardast yaar .... mahfil laa gaa bahi app tooo....

[quote]Originally posted by Nosheen


Kiya Mila Mohabbat say??

khawab ki musaffat say
visal ki tamazaat say
rooz-o-shaab reazaat say

kiya mila mohabbat say?

aik hijr kaa sehra
aik shaam yaadoo ki
aik thaka hoa ansoo..[/quote]

Oyeh mera shair chooora ker yahan paste kardia baaz ajao 9sheen copy na kia karo :zzz

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[quote]Originally posted by insha_ji


[quote]Originally posted by Nosheen


Kiya Mila Mohabbat say??

khawab ki musaffat say
visal ki tamazaat say
rooz-o-shaab reazaat say

kiya mila mohabbat say?

aik hijr kaa sehra
aik shaam yaadoo ki
aik thaka hoa ansoo..[/quote]

Oyeh mera shair chooora ker yahan paste kardia baaz ajao 9sheen copy na kia karo :zzz [/quote]

meinay koi copy nahin kiya... aap ko agar koi nazam pasand ho to baqi logoon per pabandi lag jaati hay usau perhai ki kiya?

aur YEH AAP KAA to nahin hay...

very nice PAKIREBEL

oho meney kub kaha mene likhi hey meney yeh kaha mey yeh DU baar already post kar chooka hoon lol

aap dono ghalat ho......ye aap dono mai se kisi ne meree diary se chraya hai....ye meree diari mai tha...:angry

meree fuvt poems mai se aik

That is what is called a BEAUTY...

Cupid u got an excellent choice in poetry but still after me..

take care

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Originally posted by Nosheen             That is what is called a BEAUTY...   Cupid u got an excellent choice in poetry but still after me..   take care

arrey nahi yaar....hum aap ki choice tak kahan pohanch saktey hain.......:sarc

it is so nice of u tro admit that...:cool

poem of da day
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good:)

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Originally posted by Nosheen             good:)

zara nawazi hai aap ki

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Originally posted by Cupid             poem of da day [img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/sha2.jpg[/img]

agood one cupid ji very nice

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Originally posted by Simple Girl             QUOTE Originally posted by Cupid             poem of da day agood one cupid ji very nice

Adaab

the poems cupid has posted have already been poested ;shiddaten in this very thread and this one in shairi !! nice ?? yes both are very nice i love them both

okey okey,........here is new one



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Nice lil poem

good one...

poem of the day


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OMG!!!!!!!!! this is freaky i am just listening to this ghazal

It is in Silsilay by Jagjit singh...

VERY good cupid....

apnay hathoon per sajana chahta hoon
aa tujhay mein gunguna chahta hoon

koi aansoo teray daman per gera ker
boond ko moti baanana chahta hoon

taak gaya mein kertay kertay yaad tuj ko
aab tujhay mein yaad aana chahta hoon

chaa reha hay saari basti mein andheera
roshni hoo ghar jalna chahta hoon

akari hitcki teray zanoo pay aaiyay
moat bhi mein shayrana chahta hoon............

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Originally posted by Nosheen             OMG!!!!!!!!! this is freaky i am just listening to this ghazal   It is in Silsilay by Jagjit singh... VERY good cupid....

thank u.......

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Originally posted by Nosheen             apnay hathoon per sajana chahta hoon aa tujhay mein gunguna chahta hoon koi aansoo teray daman per gera ker boond ko moti baanana chahta hoon taak gaya mein kertay kertay yaad tuj ko aab tujhay mein yaad aana chahta hoon chaa reha hay saari basti mein andheera roshni hoo ghar jalna chahta hoon akari hitcki teray zanoo pay aaiyay moat bhi mein shayrana chahta hoon............

kya taste hai aap ka....





taak gaya mein kertay kertay yaad tuj ko
aab tujhay mein yaad aana chahta hoon



akari hitcki teray zanoo pay aaiyay
moat bhi mein shayrana chahta hoon

thanks Cupid....

Qateel Shahfai sahib ki ghazal hay.. aur Jagjit singh ki awaz hay.. it is a great combination....

yup......

teray aanay ki khabar mehkay
teri khoshboo say saara ghar mehkaay

shaam mehkay teray taswoor say
shaam kay baad phir sehar mehkay

raat baar soactha reha tuj ko
zehan -o-dil meray raat baar mehkay

yaad aaiay to dil monaver hoo
deed ho jaiy to nazar mehkay

woh gaari do gaari jahan beatay
woh zameen mehkay woh shajaar mehkay

teray aanay ki jaab khabar mehkay
teri khoshboo say saara ghar mehkay.......

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Originally posted by Cupid             meree fuvt poems mai se aik [img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/shid.gif[/img]

wow cupid
its one of the best poems i'v ever read

khushhaal se tum bhi lugtay ho..
yun afsurda to hum bhi nahee..
per jan'nay wale jantay hain..khush tum bhi anhee ..
khush hum bhi nahee

tum apni khudi k pehray main...
aur daam e gharoor main jakray hueuy....
hum apnay zaum k nerghay main..
una haath hamaray pakray huay

mehsoor e talatum aaj bhi ho..
go tum ne kinaray dhond liyey..
.toofaan se sambhlay hum bhi nahee..
kehnay ko kinaray dhoond liyey

ik mudat se ghaltan paichan..
tum rabt o guraiz k dharoan mein..
hum apnay aap se uljhay huay..
pachtawoan k angaroan mein

khamosh se tum ho muhur ba-lub..
jug beet gaey kuch baat kiyeey...
suno khel adhoora chortay hain..
bina chaal chalay bina maat kiyeey

jo bhagtay bhagtay thukk jaein..
wo sayey rukk bhi saktay hain.. c
halo toro qasam iqraar kerain..
hum dono jhukk bhi saktay hain

koi mou'sam ho visle-o-hijer ka
hum yaad rakhtay hain
teri batoon say iss dil ko
bohut abaad rakhtay hain

kabhi dil kay sahifay per
tujhay tasveer kertay hain
kabhi palkoon ki chaoon may tughay zanjeer kertay hain
kabhi kh'wabeeda shamoon may
kabhi barish ki ratoon may

koi mou'sam ho visle-o-hijer ka
hum yaad rakhtay hain

teri batoon say iss dil ko
bohut abaad rakhtay hain

"SHAK"
You know agar Insaan ke dil main SHAK aajaay tu kia hota hai???phir ye sab hota hai.........


Khwaab Toot Jaatay Hain
Bheer main zamaane ki,haath choot jaatay hain
Dost daar lehjo'n main silwatain si parti hain
Ik zara si ranjish se
Shak ki zard tehni par phool badgumaani ke
Is tarah se khiltay hain
Zindagi se piaaray bhi,Ajnabi se lagtay hain
Gair banke miltay hain
Umr bhar ki chahat ko,aasra nahin milta
Maazrat ke lafzo'n ki roshni nahi milti
Lazzat_e_pazeeraai phir kabhi nahi milti
Phool rang waado'n ki
Manzilain sukarti hain
Raah murne lagti hai
Khwaab toot jaatay hain...

exellent Maham bahoy khoob