[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


pir kiis ne chorree kia.??..mai ne nahi kia ,....diary ya noghtmare ne choree kia hoga--:sarc [/quote]

well you did you did and you did :angry mujhy karni thi amjad islam amjad ki nazam jo aap ne whirlwind ke treah par ki aur aap ke iss tread par bhi bohat chori hoti hai nosheen aur diary bhi karti hain:sniff:sniff

nahin koi yaad ji..

it is just a itefaq kay humhari choice aik jaisi hay.. yaa humhein same poems pasand hein..
is mein chori ki kiya baat hay..

[quote]Originally posted by Nosheen


nahin koi yaad ji..

it is just a itefaq kay humhari choice aik jaisi hay.. yaa humhein same poems pasand hein..
is mein chori ki kiya baat hay..
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ji zaroor sab ko meri hi cheezen kiyon pasand aati hain :sniff:(

yeh chota sa qita mujhay bohat pasand hai


Maine is taur se chaha tujhe aksar janan
Jaise mehtaab ko bay ant samundar chahe
Jais sooraj ki kiran seep ke dil men utre
Jaise khushbu ko hawa rung se hat kar chahe

I just love it:)

a nice poem:)



how is it?

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Originally posted by KoiYaad             yeh chota sa qita mujhay bohat pasand hai Maine is taur se chaha tujhe aksar janan Jaise mehtaab ko bay ant samundar chahe Jais sooraj ki kiran seep ke dil men utre Jaise khushbu ko hawa rung se hat kar chahe   I just love it:)

poori poem haazir hai


mai ne iss taur se chaha tujey aksar jaanan
jaisey mehtab ko bay anth samundar chahey
jaisey sooraj ki kiran seep ke diil mai utrey
jaisey khushboo ko hawa rang se hat kar chahey
jaisey ghunchey kiley mosam se hina mangtey hain
jaisey khabo mai khayalo ki kaman toot-thi hai
jaisey barish ki dua aabla paa mangtey hain
mera har khab merey sach ki gawahi dey ga
woos-at e deed ne tujh se teree khahish ki hai
meree socho mai kabi dek sara paa apna
mai ne dunya se alag teree parstish ki hai

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Originally posted by Maham             a nice poem:)   how is it?

beautiful maham,.....whos da poet..?is dis ur handwriting..?

no it's not:( but mujhse bohut milti hai..
and i don't know the poet!!but i like this poem:)

[img]http://shehzadroybest.esmartweb.com/pagalankhonwali.jpg[/img]

???

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Originally posted by KoiYaad             yeh chota sa qita mujhay bohat pasand hai Maine is taur se chaha tujhe aksar janan Jaise mehtaab ko bay ant samundar chahe Jais sooraj ki kiran seep ke dil men utre Jaise khushbu ko hawa rung se hat kar chahe   I just love it:)

wow

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Originally posted by Cupid             QUOTE Originally posted by KoiYaad             yeh chota sa qita mujhay bohat pasand hai Maine is taur se chaha tujhe aksar janan Jaise mehtaab ko bay ant samundar chahe Jais sooraj ki kiran seep ke dil men utre Jaise khushbu ko hawa rung se hat kar chahe   I just love it:) poori poem haazir hai mai ne iss taur se chaha tujey aksar jaanan jaisey mehtab ko bay anth samundar chahey jaisey sooraj ki kiran seep ke diil mai utrey jaisey khushboo ko hawa rang se hat kar chahey jaisey ghunchey kiley mosam se hina mangtey hain jaisey khabo mai khayalo ki kaman toot-thi hai jaisey barish ki dua aabla paa mangtey hain mera har khab merey sach ki gawahi dey ga woos-at e deed ne tujh se teree khahish ki hai meree socho mai kabi dek sara paa apna mai ne dunya se alag teree parstish ki hai

Thanks a lot cupid oh I'm so happy I loved this one and now I have it compleatly wow thanks to you ! wow! this is so pretty , how do you get all these things ? wow who's the poet ????????????????????

BTW isn't your site done yet ??????? how long are you gonna take in compleating it ????????

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Originally posted by Maham             a nice poem:)   [img]http://shehzadroybest.esmartweb.com/somethingspecial.jpg[/img] how is it?

That's so nice maham I always say ur choice is very nice too

Jahan pholon ko khilna tha wahin khilte toh achha tha
Tumhi ko hum ne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha
Koi aarkar hamen pooche tumhain kaise bhulaya hai
Tumhare khat ko ashkon se shab-e-ghum men jalaya hai
Hazaron zakhm ayse hain agar silte to achha tha
Tumhi ko humne chhha tha tumhi milte to achha tha

Tumhain jitna bhlaya hai Tumhari yaad aai hai
Bahr-e-nau jo aai hai wahi khushbo hi lai hai
Tumhare lab meri khatir agar hilte to achha tha
Tumhi ko humne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha

Mila hai lutf bhi hum ko haseen yaadon ki jhilmil men
Kati hai zindagi tum bin agar kami si hai dil me
Agar milte to achha tha agar aate to achha tha
Tumhi ko hum ne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha

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Originally posted by KoiYaad             Jahan pholon ko khilna tha wahin khilte toh achha tha   Tumhi ko hum ne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha Koi aarkar hamen pooche tumhain kaise bhulaya hai Tumhare khat  ko ashkon se shab-e-ghum men jalaya hai Hazaron zakhm ayse hain agar silte to achha tha Tumhi ko humne chhha tha tumhi milte to achha tha Tumhain jitna bhlaya hai Tumhari yaad aai hai Bahr-e-nau jo aai hai wahi khushbo hi lai hai Tumhare lab meri khatir agar hilte to achha tha Tumhi ko humne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha Mila hai lutf bhi hum ko haseen yaadon ki jhilmil men   Kati hai zindagi tum bin agar kami si hai dil me Agar milte to achha tha agar aate to achha tha Tumhi ko hum ne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha

beautiful....poet SAAD ULLAH SHAH hai i think

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Originally posted by KoiYaad             QUOTE Originally posted by Cupid             QUOTE Originally posted by KoiYaad             yeh chota sa qita mujhay bohat pasand hai Maine is taur se chaha tujhe aksar janan Jaise mehtaab ko bay ant samundar chahe Jais sooraj ki kiran seep ke dil men utre Jaise khushbu ko hawa rung se hat kar chahe   I just love it:) poori poem haazir hai mai ne iss taur se chaha tujey aksar jaanan jaisey mehtab ko bay anth samundar chahey jaisey sooraj ki kiran seep ke diil mai utrey jaisey khushboo ko hawa rang se hat kar chahey jaisey ghunchey kiley mosam se hina mangtey hain jaisey khabo mai khayalo ki kaman toot-thi hai jaisey barish ki dua aabla paa mangtey hain mera har khab merey sach ki gawahi dey ga woos-at e deed ne tujh se teree khahish ki hai meree socho mai kabi dek sara paa apna mai ne dunya se alag teree parstish ki hai Thanks a lot cupid oh I'm so happy I loved this one and now I have it compleatly wow thanks to you ! wow! this is so pretty , how do you get all these things ? wow who's the poet ???????????????????? BTW isn't your site done yet ??????? how long are you gonna take in compleating it ????????

- - aap ki diary se nahi churaya,.........AUR pasand karney ka shukriya--

tu man shudi man tan shudam
tu tan shudi man jan shudam
ta kas na goyed ba-ad azeen
tu dee-gari man dee-garam


kaisa..?

abhi kuch pal hamare haath me hain
kon jane
kon sa lamha hamare hath se fisle gire
aur paon ki zanjeer ho jaye
abhi ye din jo lagta hai ke hum aik dosre ke saath
rah sakte hain pal do pal
na jane kab kahan deewar ban jaye
abhi do chaar saansen bach rahi hain
ye to jhonka hain
kise maalum kis aahistagi se yun guzar jayen
ke hum daryayon ke do mukhtalif naashna gonge kinaron per
khade
aik dosre ki shakl takne ko taras jayen
meri aawaz teri yaad me zinda ho bas
aur main teri tasweer aankhon me liye rona chipaon
shahrwalon se
abhi kuch pal hamare haath me hain
hum jo chahenge to kuch kum kum bhi mil lenge
magar jane kahan..........?
kab.......?
kon sa lamha...............?

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Originally posted by Maham             a nice poem:)   [img]http://shehzadroybest.esmartweb.com/somethingspecial.jpg[/img] how is it?

bahut khoob Maham

thanks Nightmare and KoiYaad:)

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Originally posted by Cupid             QUOTE Originally posted by KoiYaad             Jahan pholon ko khilna tha wahin khilte toh achha tha   Tumhi ko hum ne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha Koi aarkar hamen pooche tumhain kaise bhulaya hai Tumhare khat  ko ashkon se shab-e-ghum men jalaya hai Hazaron zakhm ayse hain agar silte to achha tha Tumhi ko humne chhha tha tumhi milte to achha tha Tumhain jitna bhlaya hai Tumhari yaad aai hai Bahr-e-nau jo aai hai wahi khushbo hi lai hai Tumhare lab meri khatir agar hilte to achha tha Tumhi ko humne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha Mila hai lutf bhi hum ko haseen yaadon ki jhilmil men   Kati hai zindagi tum bin agar kami si hai dil me Agar milte to achha tha agar aate to achha tha Tumhi ko hum ne chha tha tumhi milte to achha tha beautiful....poet SAAD ULLAH SHAH hai i think

yes it is nice guess

tumhare pyar ka sadqa
ye kuch ghazlen
yeh kuch nazmen
yeh kuch anmol si yaaden
yeh kuch be-rabt si baatein
jo khul ker kah na paya mai
jo sadme sah na paya mai
ye sab kuch aur woh sab kuch
jo nagufta raha hum me
inhi yaadon ka hissa hain
inhi ka aik qissa hain
yeh kuch nazmen
yeh kuch ghazlen
tumhare pyar ka sadqa

aik nazam

Shaam ke saye par
Aks para tanhai ka
Yaadon ki pari phuwaar
Aur barasti rahi boond boond
Kabhi andar tak dukh baras gaya
kabhi khushyon ki pari phuwaar
Yeh yaaden hi hain
Jo rulati hain aur hnsati hain
Aur yaad karati hain :sniff ......................

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Originally posted by KoiYaad             aik nazam   Shaam ke saye par Aks para tanhai ka Yaadon ki pari phuwaar Aur barasti rahi boond boond Kabhi andar tak dukh baras gaya kabhi khushyon ki pari phuwaar Yeh yaaden hi hain Jo rulati hain aur hnsati hain Aur yaad karati hain :sniff ......................

[img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/yaad.jpg[/img]

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Originally posted by Cupid             QUOTE Originally posted by KoiYaad             aik nazam   Shaam ke saye par Aks para tanhai ka Yaadon ki pari phuwaar Aur barasti rahi boond boond Kabhi andar tak dukh baras gaya kabhi khushyon ki pari phuwaar Yeh yaaden hi hain Jo rulati hain aur hnsati hain Aur yaad karati hain :sniff ...................... [img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/yaad.jpg[/img]

Yaden pagal kar deti hain
Baten pagal kar deti hain
Din to khar guzar jata hai
Raaten ppagal kar deti hain :sniff

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Originally posted by KoiYaad             QUOTE Originally posted by Cupid             QUOTE Originally posted by KoiYaad             aik nazam   Shaam ke saye par Aks para tanhai ka Yaadon ki pari phuwaar Aur barasti rahi boond boond Kabhi andar tak dukh baras gaya kabhi khushyon ki pari phuwaar Yeh yaaden hi hain Jo rulati hain aur hnsati hain Aur yaad karati hain :sniff ...................... [img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/yaad.jpg[/img] Yaden pagal kar deti hain Baten pagal kar deti hain Din to khar guzar jata hai Raaten ppagal kar deti hain :sniff

[img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/yad.gif[/img]

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Originally posted by Cupid             QUOTE Originally posted by KoiYaad             QUOTE Originally posted by Cupid             QUOTE Originally posted by KoiYaad             aik nazam   Shaam ke saye par Aks para tanhai ka Yaadon ki pari phuwaar Aur barasti rahi boond boond Kabhi andar tak dukh baras gaya kabhi khushyon ki pari phuwaar Yeh yaaden hi hain Jo rulati hain aur hnsati hain Aur yaad karati hain :sniff ...................... [img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/yaad.jpg[/img] Yaden pagal kar deti hain Baten pagal kar deti hain Din to khar guzar jata hai Raaten ppagal kar deti hain :sniff [img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/yad.gif[/img]

Woh aik yaad ki har lamha zehan men jagi
Woh aik zikr ki lehje bhi hum badal na sake

Woh aik naam ki jiss naam ko na bhoole kabhi
Woh aik raah ki jis se kabhi nikal na sake

baqi baad men

I'm off Salaamz

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Originally posted by KoiYaad             I'm off Salaamz

Allah Hafiz

Mujhay bus itna kehna hai
Kabhi main yaad aaoon to
Kabhi tanhai ki raatain
Tumhain ziada sataein to
Kabhi titli na bolay to
Aur jugnoo lout jaye to
Kabhi jab dil bhi bhar jaye
Koi jab sunn na paye to
Agar sab dost sathi bhi
Jo tum se rooth jaaein to
Kabhi jab khud se lar lar kar
Thakan se choor ho jao
Kabhi chahtay huay bhi khud akelay
Ro na paao to
Apni aankhon ko band karna
Mujhay aawaz de dena
Aur phir meray tasawwur se
Jo chaho batain keh dena
Meray kaandhay pe sir rakh kar
Tum jitna chaho ro lena
Phir khud main jab loat jao to
Us he duniya chalay jana
Magar bas itna kehna hai
Ke jab bhi dukh ya khushiyon main
Hamain dil se pukaro gay
Hamain tum saath pao gay

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Originally posted by Nightmare             tumhare pyar ka sadqa ye kuch ghazlen yeh kuch nazmen yeh kuch anmol si yaaden yeh kuch be-rabt si baatein jo khul ker kah na paya mai jo sadme sah na paya mai ye sab kuch aur woh sab kuch jo nagufta raha hum me   inhi yaadon ka hissa hain inhi ka aik qissa hain yeh kuch nazmen   yeh kuch ghazlen   tumhare pyar ka sadqa

[glow tcolor=red, fcolor=black, size=2, strength=1]YE BEHTER HAI[/glow]

mai sochta hoon kuch uss se kahoon
koyee baat mohabat ulfat ki
koyee baat sunehrey khabin ki
koyee baat ke jiss ki rag rag se
bay-nam si khushbu poot-thi ho
pir sochta hoon kya hasil hai
gar uss ko sab kuch keh be diya
ye lafz akarat jayengey
mai sochta hoon aik geet likoon
unn komal pyarey hathon par
uss poolon waley anchal par
jisey od ke wo ik pari lagey
kabi sochta hoon koyee nazm kahoon
bas jiss mai uss ki baten hon
unn gehri gehri ankon par
jin ankon mai kayee sadiyon ke
kayi qisey hain afsaney hain
pir aksar yooun be sochta hoon
mai kuch na kahoon ye behtar hai
har zakham chupa kar seeney mai
bas dukh he sahoon ye behtar hai
jahan lafz yaqeen se khali hon
wahan chup he rahoon ye behter hai...

BaadbaaN kHulne se pehle ka ishaara dekhna ... (Click here)

Kuchh to hawa bHi sard tHi ...

Paa ba gil sub haeN ...

Waqt se koi shikayat hae na aflaak se hae ...

-By Perveen Shakir

[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare


tumhare pyar ka sadqa
ye kuch ghazlen
yeh kuch nazmen
yeh kuch anmol si yaaden
yeh kuch be-rabt si baatein
jo khul ker kah na paya mai
jo sadme sah na paya mai
ye sab kuch aur woh sab kuch
jo nagufta raha hum me
inhi yaadon ka hissa hain
inhi ka aik qissa hain
yeh kuch nazmen
yeh kuch ghazlen
tumhare pyar ka sadqa[/quote]



[glow tcolor=red, fcolor=black, size=2, strength=1]YE BEHTER HAI[/glow]

mai sochta hoon kuch uss se kahoon
koyee baat mohabat ulfat ki
koyee baat sunehrey khabin ki
koyee baat ke jiss ki rag rag se
bay-nam si khushbu poot-thi ho
pir sochta hoon kya hasil hai
gar uss ko sab kuch keh be diya
ye lafz akarat jayengey
mai sochta hoon aik geet likoon
unn komal pyarey hathon par
uss poolon waley anchal par
jisey od ke wo ik pari lagey
kabi sochta hoon koyee nazm kahoon
bas jiss mai uss ki baten hon
unn gehri gehri ankon par
jin ankon mai kayee sadiyon ke
kayi qisey hain afsaney hain
pir aksar yooun be sochta hoon
mai kuch na kahoon ye behtar hai
har zakham chupa kar seeney mai
bas dukh he sahoon ye behtar hai
jahan lafz yaqeen se khali hon
wahan chup he rahoon ye behter hai...[/quote]


lekin lafz yaqeen se khali hi kyun hon???????????

kisi khushnigaah si aankh ne ye kamaal mujh pe karam kiya
meri loh-e- jaan pe raqam kiya
woh jo aik chand sa harf tha woh jo aik saham sa naam tha
woh jo aik phool si baat phirti thi darbard
use gulsitan ka pata diya
mera dil ke shahr-e-malaal tha use roshni me basa diya
meri aankh aur mere khwab ko kisi aik pal me baham kiya
mafre aino pe jo gard thi mah-o-saal ki
woh utar gayi
woh jo dhondh thi mere charso woh bikhar gayi
sabhi roop aks-e-jamaal ke
sabhi khwab shaam-e-khayal ke
jo ghubaar-e-waqt me sas ba sar the ate hue
woh chamak uthe
woh jo phool raah ki dhool the woh mahak uthe
liye saat rang bahaar ke
chala mai jo sang bahaar ke
to saja diye sabhi raaste
kisi dast-e-shubdahsaaz ne
mere naam per mere waaste
meri beghari ko panaah di meri justajo ko nishan diya
jo yaqeen se bhi haseen hai mujhe aik aisa guman diya
woh jo rezah rezah wajood tha
use ik nazar me baham kiya
kisi khushnigaah si aankh ne
yeh kamaal mujh pe karam kiya

[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare




Mujhay bus itna kehna hai
Kabhi main yaad aaoon to
Kabhi tanhai ki raatain
Tumhain ziada sataein to
Kabhi titli na bolay to
Aur jugnoo lout jaye to
Kabhi jab dil bhi bhar jaye
Koi jab sunn na paye to
Agar sab dost sathi bhi
Jo tum se rooth jaaein to
Kabhi jab khud se lar lar kar
Thakan se choor ho jao
Kabhi chahtay huay bhi khud akelay
Ro na paao to
Apni aankhon ko band karna
Mujhay aawaz de dena
Aur phir meray tasawwur se
Jo chaho batain keh dena
Meray kaandhay pe sir rakh kar
Tum jitna chaho ro lena
Phir khud main jab loat jao to
Us he duniya chalay jana
Magar bas itna kehna hai
Ke jab bhi dukh ya khushiyon main
Hamain dil se pukaro gay
Hamain tum saath pao gay




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[glow tcolor=red, fcolor=black, size=2, strength=1]EHSAS E QURB[/glow]

Thak ke parbat pe gira mehr e ziya bar kaheen
dour thak had e nazr pela udasi ka ghubar
aur har simt se pir raat namudaar hoyee
daman e noor mai khush rang tilasmat liye
chand nikla ke tera roo e haseen ho jaisey
chandni utri hai har aik dar o bam pe youn
kisi shaney pe tera lams e jabeen ho jaisey
gosha e dil mai kaheen soz e daroon jaag utta
pir kisi soch mai ehsas e zaboon jaag utta
aik par warda aziat ka fasoon jaag uta
kya karoon pir dil e wehshi ka janoon jag utta
dard e dil hai ke sada dushman e jaan tehra hai
dard chal nikla tho pir jald kahan tehra hai
"PAR TEREE YAAD HAI IK MOONS O GHAM-KHWAR MEREE"
pir tasawar se terey dil ko mila chain ke youn
tu merey gosh e dil he ki makeen ho jaisey
dasht e tanhayee mai kuch merey kareen ho jaisey

[img]http://shehzadroybest.esmartweb.com/aaj_rothey_howey.gif[/img]

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


[img]AAJ ROOTEY HOOYE SAJAN KO BAHOT YAAD KIYA[/img][/quote]



nice ........shukar hai ke koyee urdu mai be post karta hai

JAjab kabi gardish e taqdeer ne gera hai hamen
gayesoo e yaar ke uljan ko nahot yaad kia.....

shukr hai Maham aap aayi to dairy bhi pata nahi kahan gum ho gayi hain aap dono ki posts ki kami mahsoos ho rahi thi

dil-e-naashaad pe khushiyon ki nazar hone tak
maut aa jaayegi aabaad ye ghar hone tak

zabt ki saari hadon se mai guzar jaaungaa
Gham ka izhaar sar-e-deedah-e-tar hone tak

meri vahshat ko guzarna hai maraahil se kayi
daaman-e-yaar pe ashkon ko guhar hone tak

kitni mauten hain, Ilaahi! meri taqdeer men aur?
umr baaqi hai jo ab, us ko basar hone tak

ishq ka achcha buraa ham ne suna tha, lekin
dil gaya faislaa-e-khair-o-khatar hone tak

barq-o-tufaan, kari dhuup, khizaaN ke mausam
dekhen kya guzre hai daane pe shajar hone tak

[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare



dil-e-naashaad pe khushiyon ki nazar hone tak
maut aa jaayegi aabaad ye ghar hone tak
[/quote]

dil-e-naashaad pe khushiyon ki nazar hone tak
maut aa jaayegi aabaad ye ghar hone tak ..........................

hammmm....

tum nay kia naaa yaad hum ko kabhee bhool kar..........
hum nay tumharee yaad main sab kuch bhula dia

Zikr ik roz palatne ka kiya tha tum ne
Ik diya dil ke andheron men Jala rakha hai

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Mere khaliq meri aankhon ko jo nam rakhta hai
Uss ke sehra ko bhi daryaon ke tevar dena:(


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I love these two shers

kya dono ki coplete ghazal mil sake gi cupid ya diary ya maham ?

hammmmm.................
ok

topic is
(asa chahra nahin dakha)

asi ankhan nahin dakhin
asa kajal nahin dakha
asa jalwa nahin dakha
asa chahra nahin dakha
jab yah daman ke hoa dain
agg jangal main laga dain
jab yah sahraon main jaya
rait main phool khilaya


ase dunya nahin dakhi
asa manzar nahin dakha
asa alam nahin dakha
asa dil baar nahin dakha
us kay kangan ka kharakna
jasa bulbul ka chahkana
us ke pazab ke cham cham
jasay barsat ka musam


asa sawan nahin dakha
asi barish nahin dakhi
asi rim ghim nahin dakhi
asi khawaish nahin dakhi
us ke ba baat see batain
jasay sardee ke ho ratayan
uff yah tanhai yah masti
jasay tufan main kashti



mithee koyal see hay boli
jasay gitton ke rangooli
sorkh galaon pay pasina
jasay sawan ka mahina
asi ankhan nahin dakhin
asa kajal nahin dakha
asa jalwa nahin dakha
asa chahra nahin dakha

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


Zikr ik roz palatne ka kiya tha tum ne
Ik diya dil ke andheron men Jala rakha hai

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Mere khaliq meri aankhon ko jo nam rakhta hai
Uss ke sehra ko bhi daryaon ke tevar dena:(


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I love these two shers

kya dono ki coplete ghazal mil sake gi cupid ya diary ya maham ?[/quote] for u

toone ye phool jo zulfon mein lagaa rakhaa hai
ik diyaa hai jo andheron mein jalaa rakhaa hai


jeet le jaaye koi mujhako nasiibon waalaa
zindagi ne mujhe daa o pe lagaa rakhaa hai

zikr ik roz palatne ka kiya tha tum ne
ik diya dil ke andheron men Jala rakha hai

jaane kab aaye koi dil mein jhaankne waalaa
is liye main ne Girebaan ko khulaa rakhaa hai


imtehaan aur merii zabt kaa tum kyaa loge
main ne dharkan ko bhii seene mein chupaa rakhaa hai

by the way this poem is from Qateel Shafai and he's one of my most my fav poets:)

but i have found another ghazal it's also like this ghazal...it's by Nisar Akhtar..here

kaun kahtaa hai tujhe main ne bhulaa rakhaa hai
teri yaadon ko kaleje se lagaa rakhaa hai

lab pe aahen bhi nahin aankh mein aansuu bhii nahin
dil ne har raaz muhabbat kaa chhupaa rakhaa hai

tuune jo dil ke andhere me.n jalaayaa thaa kabhii
vo diyaa aaj bhii siine me.n jalaa rakhaa hai

dekh jaa aake mahakate huye zaKhmon kii bahaar
mai.n ne ab tak tere gulashan ko sajaa rakhaa hai

[glow tcolor=blue, fcolor=black, size=4, strength=1]Can someone help me?[/glow]

I LOVE this ghazal

Can u tell me ke ye ghazal kis shaaer ki hai?I don't know:( but it sounds like it was from Qateel shafai...but i don't know..and can u post the whole ghazal?
it's here:

Kab yaad main tera saath nahin,kab haath mein tera hath nahin
Sadd Shukr ke apni raato'n main,ab hijr ki koi raat nahin

Jis dhajj se koi maqtal main gya,wo shaan salamat rehti hai
Ye jaan tu aani jaani hai,is jaan ki koi baat nahin

Mushkil hain agar halaat wahan,dil day aaen jaa'n bech aaen
Dil waalo kocha_e_jana'n main kia aisay bhi halaat nahin

Ye baazi ishq ki baazi hai,jo chaho lagado darr kaisa
Gar jeet gaey tu kia kehna,haaray bhi tu baazi maat nahin

hammmm.........

(wasi shah)
samandar main utarta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain
tari ankhoon to parta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain

tara naam likhna ke ijazat chin gai jaab say
koi bhee lafaz likhta hay too ankhan bheeg jati hain

tari yadoon ke khushboo khirkyoon main rakas karti hay
taray gham main sulagta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain

main haas kay jhal lata hoon judai ke sabhee rasmain
galay jab us kay lagta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain

na jana ho gaya hoon ess kadar hassas main kab say
kissi say baat karta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain

woh sab guzra hoa lamhat mugh ko yaad atay hain
tumhara khat jo parta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain

main sara din bohat masroof rahta hoon magar junhe
kadam chokhat pay rakhta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain

baray loogon kay uncha badnuma or sarad mahloon ko
gharib ankhoon say takta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain

hazaroon mosmaoon ke hukmarani hay mara dil par
wasi main jab bhee hasta hoon too ankhan bheeg jati hain;)

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


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[quote]Originally posted by Cupid

nice ........shukar hai ke koyee urdu mai be post karta hai
[/quote]

yeh Ghazal aap kee nazar....

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[quote]Originally posted by Maham


[glow tcolor=blue, fcolor=black, size=4, strength=1]Can someone help me?[/glow]

I LOVE this ghazal

Can u tell me ke ye ghazal kis shaaer ki hai?I don't know:( but it sounds like it was from Qateel shafai...but i don't know..and can u post the whole ghazal?
it's here:

Kab yaad main tera saath nahin,kab haath mein tera hath nahin
Sadd Shukr ke apni raato'n main,ab hijr ki koi raat nahin

Jis dhajj se koi maqtal main gya,wo shaan salamat rehti hai
Ye jaan tu aani jaani hai,is jaan ki koi baat nahin

Mushkil hain agar halaat wahan,dil day aaen jaa'n bech aaen
Dil waalo kocha_e_jana'n main kia aisay bhi halaat nahin

Ye baazi ishq ki baazi hai,jo chaho lagado darr kaisa
Gar jeet gaey tu kia kehna,haaray bhi tu baazi maat nahin[/quote]

poet is faiz ahmad faiz...i'll post this ghazal later