i knew dat......i thought i wil ask u today that r u........?

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very nice cupid:) bohat udasi hai aaj:D

[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


i knew dat......i thought i wil ask u today that r u........?

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Oh my God !!! cupid this is just too good for words *sobz*:sniff *sobz* :sniff this is just the type of poetry I absoluotly love !! thanks a million for posting it

i started a series of poem.............and im sure u will like all

And I'm sure your friend must be happy too you bet 'I'm' gonna love all the poems you post coz ur choice is too good and I simply love poems

for my friend..................


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Very nice I'm off now gotta get some sleep Salaamz

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


Very nice I'm off now gotta get some sleep Salaamz [/quote]
shab-a-kher bhai.......me out ........feel sleepy.........tomoro

yeah sure tomorrow Salaamz but you come so late !! I have to go to sleep at this time Salaamz now I'm really off

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


yeah sure tomorrow Salaamz but you come so late !! I have to go to sleep at this time Salaamz now I'm really off [/quote]
i came early today......but no one was here in poetry section........mai ne kayee maki macher marey

wow
so deep
gud 1 cupid

awesome.. good excellent...

vey good choice cupid.. keep them coming....

but do a favour specify poet's name...

[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


i started a series of poem.............and im sure u will like all cause u know my choice..............
and dez all for my friend........my friend came back..............i m happy ........too happy[/quote]
ya cupid ur poems r so nice so beautiful aachi choice hai

oh...thanx yaaro..................u people lke dez so i m posting another best poem dis night
wait for another.............it will be about "TALASH"

Wakfe-e-harmaan o paas rehta hay
Dil hay Aksar Udaas Rehta hay
TUM TO GHUM DAY KAY BHOOL JATAY HO
MUJHKO EHSAAN KA PAAS REHTA HAY:sarc

[quote]Originally posted by krazy_gurl


Wakfe-e-harmaan o paas rehta hay
Dil hay Aksar Udaas Rehta hay
TUM TO GHUM DAY KAY BHOOL JATAY HO
MUJHKO EHSAAN KA PAAS REHTA HAY:sarc [/quote]

acha hai

aab kay hum pay yeh kaisa saal paara logo
shehroon mein awazoon kaa kaal paara logo

her chehra do takroon mein takseem hoa
aab kay diloon mein aisa baal paara logo

adhooray kjhwab k underr kabhi pulkain bichana mutt
adhooray khwaab akelay main buhat takleef detay hain

[quote]Originally posted by Nosheen


aab kay hum pay yeh kaisa saal paara logo
shehroon mein awazoon kaa kaal paara logo

her chehra do takroon mein takseem hoa
aab kay diloon mein aisa baal paara logo[/quote]

ye tasali hai ke hain barbad sab
mai akela he nahi nashaad sab

cool ke sab ranjeeshen sab aik hain
main batawoon sab ko hoga yaad sab

[quote]Originally posted by diary


adhooray kjhwab k underr kabhi pulkain bichana mutt
adhooray khwaab akelay main buhat takleef detay hain[/quote]

khab adoorey sahi
khab sharey tho hain

friends here is another poem for you peeps...........hope u people like this series



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But where is the poem cupid ??
BTW izzat you in your avatar:huh:huh??:huh:huh???

Oh I see it now it's nice

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


But where is the poem cupid ??
BTW izzat you in your avatar:huh:huh??:huh:huh???[/quote]

mera avatar kaisahai....?some1 told me to change it.........should I?

[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


But where is the poem cupid ??
BTW izzat you in your avatar:huh:huh??:huh:huh???[/quote]

mera avatar kaisahai....?some1 told me to change it.........should I?[/quote]

Haha i'd say you should,coz it looks way too,old put up a new recent one ! BTW who told you that ?:huh?

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


But where is the poem cupid ??
BTW izzat you in your avatar:huh:huh??:huh:huh???[/quote]

mera avatar kaisahai....?some1 told me to change it.........should I?[/quote]

Haha i'd say you should,coz it looks way too,old put up a new recent one ! BTW who told you that ?:huh?[/quote]
ah ok...but its new pic...i took it 3 days before...........and i changed colors......letme change it to color pic again...................

[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


But where is the poem cupid ??
BTW izzat you in your avatar:huh:huh??:huh:huh???[/quote]

mera avatar kaisahai....?some1 told me to change it.........should I?[/quote]

Haha i'd say you should,coz it looks way too,old put up a new recent one ! BTW who told you that ?:huh?[/quote]
ah ok...but its new pic...i took it 3 days before...........and i changed colors......letme change it to color pic again...................[/quote]

Well izzat so !! that's strange I thought it was an old pic propably of old times ! oh okay do so .but hurry as I've to go in a few mins and my connection is going super slow

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


[quote]Originally posted by Cupid


[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


But where is the poem cupid ??
BTW izzat you in your avatar:huh:huh??:huh:huh???[/quote]

mera avatar kaisahai....?some1 told me to change it.........should I?[/quote]



Haha i'd say you should,coz it looks way too,old put up a new recent one ! BTW who told you that ?:huh?[/quote]
ah ok...but its new pic...i took it 3 days before...........and i changed colors......letme change it to color pic again...................[/quote]

Well izzat so !! that's strange I thought it was an old pic propably of old times ! oh okay do so .but hurry as I've to go in a few mins and my connection is going super slow [/quote]

ah.i m trying to cahnge dis........but it says u have no permission to vieve this page r somthing like dat................i will put another one tomorow......
krazy grl also told me to change avatar

[quote]Originally posted by Cupid




ah.i m trying to cahnge dis........but it says u have no permission to vieve this page r somthing like dat................i will put another one tomorow......
krazy grl also told me to change avatar
[/quote]

Oh okay hey i have an idea let's leave the shairi thread just for shairi and post poems on this thread only howzzat ? great na then just do it and make this thread stickey

[quote]Originally posted by KoiYaad


[quote]Originally posted by Cupid




ah.i m trying to cahnge dis........but it says u have no permission to vieve this page r somthing like dat................i will put another one tomorow......
krazy grl also told me to change avatar
[/quote]

Oh okay hey i have an idea let's leave the shairi thread just for shairi and post poems on this thread only howzzat ? great na then just do it and make this thread stickey[/quote]

ah-- ok.........ok...........but this thread is not right protected.......u can also post poems .........:angry

all the poems you posted in this thread are excelent. I am looking forword to the other poems of this series. BTW aap ko itni pyari pyari nazmain aur ghazalen mil kahan se jati hain?

[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare


all the poems you posted in this thread are excelent. I am looking forword to the other poems of this series. BTW aap ko itni pyari pyari nazmain aur ghazalen mil kahan se jati hain?[/quote]
books se nightmare..............aap ka kya khayal hai mujey doondtey hooyeen merey gar ateen hongee......ya rastey main milti hongee..........................:hoho :hoho
ok i m sending u a poem to ur bom(pm) i wll pos dat poem tomorow..

LOL.Baja farmaya.I must say it also depands on your taste and I repeat that you are a very ba-zauq person. kya aap Pakistan me rahte hain? coz wahan shaaeri ki bahut achchi books milti hain. In India we can't get paki poets books

[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare


LOL.Baja farmaya.I must say it also depands on your taste and I repeat that you are a very ba-zauq person. kya aap Pakistan me rahte hain? coz wahan shaaeri ki bahut achchi books milti hain. In India we can't get paki poets books[/quote]

u from india............?..................pehley q nahi bataya......
oh yeah i m from pak.........if u need paki poets books i can send u some............

[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare


LOL.Baja farmaya.I must say it also depands on your taste and I repeat that you are a very ba-zauq person. kya aap Pakistan me rahte hain? coz wahan shaaeri ki bahut achchi books milti hain. In India we can't get paki poets books[/quote]

u didnt replied to my messege......:sarc

please don't go now

[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare


please don't go now[/quote]

ah.ok lekin yaar its almost 1 am here........and i feel sleepy..........any way i can stay for u for 30 minuts.......

I replied . Go and check it please

pehchaan

Hajra Begum ki nazr.....jalgaon ke fasaad me jin ke chaar bachchon ko fasaadiyon ne zinda jalaya tha

nahin ye bhi nahin
ye bhi nahin
ye bhi nahin....woh to
na jaane kon the
ye sab ke sab to mere jaise hain
sabhi ki dhadkano me nanhe munne chand roshan hain
sabhi meri tarah se waqt ki bhatti ke indhan hain
jinhon ne meri kutiya me andheri raat me ghus kar
meri aankhon ke aage
mere bachchon ko jalaya tha
woh koi aur the
woh chehre to kahan ab zahan me mahfooz jaj saheb
magar haan
paas hon to soongh kar pahchan sakti hoon
woh us jangal se aaye the
jahan ki auraton ki god me
bachche nahin haste

kaisi hai?

cupid please do me a favour post it in urdu

ok........i will post it in next 15 minutes........i m typing it

poem of the day..........friends also check my pencil work in image section.here is link for my skatches...... http://www.muziqpakistan.com/board/read.php?TID=6407


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wah nice...i want to post like this in urdu...but donno how to post it...cant copy and paste here... help me cupid

[quote]Originally posted by PakiRebel


wah nice...i want to post like this in urdu...but donno how to post it...cant copy and paste here... help me cupid[/quote]

ah...ok
do u have urdu software............if u have den type it in urdu.....save ur text in jpg formate den upload it on some website and den paste address of the file in image...........:sarc

[quote]Originally posted by Nightmare


pehchaan

Hajra Begum ki nazr.....jalgaon ke fasaad me jin ke chaar bachchon ko fasaadiyon ne zinda jalaya tha

nahin ye bhi nahin
ye bhi nahin
ye bhi nahin....woh to
na jaane kon the
ye sab ke sab to mere jaise hain
sabhi ki dhadkano me nanhe munne chand roshan hain
sabhi meri tarah se waqt ki bhatti ke indhan hain
jinhon ne meri kutiya me andheri raat me ghus kar
meri aankhon ke aage
mere bachchon ko jalaya tha
woh koi aur the
woh chehre to kahan ab zahan me mahfooz jaj saheb
magar haan
paas hon to soongh kar pahchan sakti hoon
woh us jangal se aaye the
jahan ki auraton ki god me
bachche nahin haste

kaisi hai?

cupid please do me a favour post it in urdu

[/quote]
here is its urdu ver
[img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/fasad.jpg[/img]

na chedo khilti kilyon hanste phoolon ko
in udti titliyon aawarah bhanwron ko
tasalsul toot jayega

fiza mah'way sama'at hai
hasin hoton ko naghmazair rahne do
nigahen nichi rakho aur mujassam gosh ho jao
agar jumbish labon ko di
tasalsul toot jayega

hawa se pattiyan sargoshiyon me mahaw hain
aur jhumti shakhon ke jhoolon main
parindon ki chahak se sara sahil
sarmadi ahsaas me dooba hua
sarshaar o shaadan hai
agar kankar bhi sathe aab par mara
tasalsul toot jayega

ufaq me doobte suraj ka manzar
is bulandi se zara dekho
isi rangeen kinare par
shafaq sona lutayegi
yunhi tum behis-o saakit raho
aise me palak bhi zara jhapkin
tasalsul toot jayega

woh khwabidah hai khwabidah hi rahne do
na jaane khwab me kin waadiyon ki sair karti ho
bulandi se phisalte aabsharon me kahin gum ho
falak -asaar choti par kahin mah'way tarannum ho
agar aawaz di tum ne
tasalsul toot jayega

main shaayer hoon
meri fikr-e-rasaa ehsas ke us satah par hai
jismen khushboo rang bharti hai
sada ko shakl milti hai
tasawwur bol uthta hai
khamoshi gungunati hai
yeh woh waqfa hai ....aise mein
agar daade sukhan bhi di
tasalsul toot jayega.

POEM OF THE YEAR

DER AALAA NIGHTMARE

here is poem.....i think u people wil like dis one
[img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/pexops.jpg[/img]

good one CUPID!!! keep it up...

poem of da day .......
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QUOTE

Originally posted by Cupid             poem of da day ....... [img]http://cupid.esmartweb.com/parinde.gif[/img]

Hmmmmmmmmmmm I've read this before .............. Farhat Abbas Shah or Noshi Gailani I forgot but I've read it somewhere it's nice