Hi,
Assalamoalikum!
i've written this poem finally;)
it's a romantic poem;) but i just wrote it...no reason!!!
it's a azaad nazm so plzzzz don laugh if u don like!!!
i'll also post my other poems here:)
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Tum zindagi,tum bandagi
Tum pyar ho, bahaar ho
Tum soch ho, khayaal ho
Tum asal ho,tasweer ho
Tum dil ke andar ho
Tum hi samandar ho
Tum khushi,tum muskuraahat
Tum badal,tum baarish
Tum aman,tum sahara
Tum chahat,tum khaab
Tum ho mere ahbaab
Tum saahil,tum manzil
Tum ho meri sachaai


Tum din main ho,tum raat main
Meri kahi har baat main
Tum dil bhi ho,tum jaan bhi
Tum hi mera imaan bhi
Tum ho mera armaan bhi
Tum aaj bhi,tum kal bhi ho
Meri likhi har ghazal bhi ho
Tum geet ho,sangeet ho
Tum hi mere mann meet ho
Khushboo ho tum aur saaz tum
Dil main chupaa jo raaz tum
Dil ki mere awaaz tum


Hansna bhi tum,rona bhi tum
Mera jaagna sona bhi tum
Likhna bhi tum,parhna bhi tum
Jeena bhi tum,marna bhi tum
Mera jeetna,mera haarna
Mera banna sanwarna bhi tum


Tum meri zaroorat
Tum meri mohabbat
Tum meri lazzat
Tum meri lagaawat
Tum meri ibaadat
Tum meri dua
Tum meri wafa


Tum ho mere qareeb
Tum mere shaaer,tum mere adeeb
Tum mere tabeeb,tum khateeb

Tum mere janaab ho
mere liyye tum "AAP" ho

oh wow

Hansna bhi tum,rona bhi tum
Mera jaagna sona bhi tum
Likhna bhi tum,parhna bhi tum
Jeena bhi tum,marna bhi tum


this is the best part


n
mere liyeey tum aap ho


wow


main apna post keroon:sarc

hey thas good

yea diary plzz post!!

wo shakhs aaj buhat hi udaas lugta hai
k jis ne luut k bhi hunsnay ki kasam khai thi
jo main ne aaj yeh poocha k kia hua tum ko
baray adub se wo bola wo aaj aai thi

:sarc

heyy that's really nice:)
wowwww!!!
aur likho..!!

good stuff Maham and Diary..........your talking about Shehzad Roy yeah?

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


heyy that's really nice:)
wowwww!!!
aur likho..!![/quote]

thx:sarc

oks

pulkoan se jub koi aansoo tupka to
teri muhabbat k do pal bhi doob gaey

[quote]Originally posted by cynic


good stuff Maham and Diary..........your talking about Shehzad Roy yeah?[/quote]

shehzad roy?
wo yahan kahan se aaya:sarc

[quote]Originally posted by diary


[quote]Originally posted by cynic


good stuff Maham and Diary..........your talking about Shehzad Roy yeah?[/quote]

shehzad roy?
wo yahan kahan se aaya:sarc[/quote]

i thought the poems might have been inspired by him

[quote]Originally posted by diary


[quote]Originally posted by cynic


good stuff Maham and Diary..........your talking about Shehzad Roy yeah?[/quote]

shehzad roy?
wo yahan kahan se aaya:sarc[/quote]he's everywhere:D

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


[quote]Originally posted by diary


[quote]Originally posted by cynic


good stuff Maham and Diary..........your talking about Shehzad Roy yeah?[/quote]

shehzad roy?
wo yahan kahan se aaya:sarc[/quote]he's everywhere:D [/quote]

lolz

imao

..ok unke liye aur kuch likho na??
ahem ahem i mean aur kuch likho:) hehe!

[quote]Originally posted by Maham



..ok unke liye aur kuch likho na??
ahem ahem i mean aur kuch likho:) hehe![/quote]

hehehhe
tum bhi to likho na

..ok!!
ye poem bhi maine khud likhi hai my choti si koshish:)
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Is zindagi main hussn ko nikhaar chahiyye
Ujray hain jo gulshan unhain bahaar chahiyye

Deewano ko ye chahiyye had se barhain na woh
aur aashqon ko dil pe ikhtiyaar chahiyye

Unko nahi tassalliye dil yaar ki taraf
Iqraar hogaya hai tu izhaar chahiyye

Soun kar awaaz yaar ki;) kehtay hain machal kar
Kaafi nahi guftaar hi deedaar chahiyye

Mohabbat ke liye laazim hain kuch ashyaai khaas bhi
Dil_o_jaa'n chahiyye imaan_o_aitbaar chahiyye

Ye sab tu hum ne paaya magar ik aur khaahish hai
Jo bewafa na ho hamain woh yaar chahiyye

kaisi hai????????

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


..ok!!
ye poem bhi maine khud likhi hai my choti si koshish:)
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Is zindagi main hussn ko nikhaar chahiyye
Ujray hain jo gulshan unhain bahaar chahiyye

Deewano ko ye chahiyye had se barhain na woh
aur aashqon ko dil pe ikhtiyaar chahiyye

Unko nahi tassalliye dil yaar ki taraf
Iqraar hogaya hai tu izhaar chahiyye

Soun kar awaaz yaar ki;) kehtay hain machal kar
Kaafi nahi guftaar hi deedaar chahiyye

Mohabbat ke liye laazim hain kuch ashyaai khaas bhi
Dil_o_jaa'n chahiyye imaan_o_aitbaar chahiyye

Ye sab tu hum ne paaya magar ik aur khaahish hai
Jo bewafa na ho hamain woh yaar chahiyye

kaisi hai????????
[/quote]

ohh its really gud


gud one:)


bait bazi per bhi to kuch kaho na

plz plz plz hunsna mutt:angry



jub murr k hee ana hai to phir jaey ga woo kyun
dunya se nahee derta to ghebrayey ga wo kyun

jub dil main nahee jaghaa muhabat ki to aye dost
phir hum se mulaqaat ko bhi aaye ga wo kyun

jub itni daleri se kia tark e mulaqaat
phir khutt ko jalanay se bhi shermaye ga wo kyun

jub neendain humaree wo chura baitha hai logon
phir chain se aaram se so paayey ga wo kyun!

:sarc

buhaat achi likhi hai good job

wwowwwwwww
tum tu shaaeraaaa hoooo
really nice:)

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


wwowwwwwww
tum tu shaaeraaaa hoooo
really nice:)[/quote]

o thanx botha u:)

..ok!
mera sheir..

Ye mohabbat ka darya giray ga jahan
Mujhe maloom nahi hai woh samundar kahan

[quote]Originally posted by diary


[quote]Originally posted by Maham


wwowwwwwww
tum tu shaaeraaaa hoooo
really nice:)[/quote]

o thanx botha u:)[/quote]
i wasnt saying nice to yur poem... i dunt wanna talk to u..:angry

[quote]Originally posted by shy_grrl


[quote]Originally posted by diary


[quote]Originally posted by Maham


wwowwwwwww
tum tu shaaeraaaa hoooo
really nice:)[/quote]

o thanx botha u:)[/quote]
i wasnt saying nice to yur poem... i dunt wanna talk to u..:angry [/quote]

shy:(
aisay to na kero:angry

and ek azaad nazm
.....
hmm bass aise hi likhi thi...........

about zindagi and its ppl!!!
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Zindagi ki raahon main
Log itne miltay hain
Zindagi ki raahon main
Log aise miltay hain

Pyar se bhi miltay hain
dard se bhi miltay hain
Dil main chupi hui wo kisi
Gard se bhi miltay hain

zindagi ki rahon main
Log aise miltay hain

Hosh se bhi miltay hain
Behosh se bhi miltay hain
Kuch tu aise hotay hain jo
Josh se bhi miltay hain
kuch ke zariye miltay hain
Dunya jahan ke waaqiye
baaz log lekin hamain
khaamosh se bhi miltay hain

Zindagi ki raahon main
Log aise miltay hain

Jaan kar bhi wo kabhi
Jaan hi na paatay hain
Pehchaan kar bhi jo kabhi
Pehchaan hi na paatay hain

Zindagi ki rahon main
Log aise miltay hain
kabhi hum khushi se miltay hain
kabhi wo kushi se miltay hain

zindagi ki rahon main...!!

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


and ek azaad nazm
.....
hmm bass aise hi likhi thi...........

about zindagi and its ppl!!!
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Zindagi ki raahon main
Log itne miltay hain
Zindagi ki raahon main
Log aise miltay hain

Pyar se bhi miltay hain
dard se bhi miltay hain
Dil main chupi hui wo kisi
Gard se bhi miltay hain

zindagi ki rahon main
Log aise miltay hain

Hosh se bhi miltay hain
Behosh se bhi miltay hain
Kuch tu aise hotay hain jo
Josh se bhi miltay hain
kuch ke zariye miltay hain
Dunya jahan ke waaqiye
baaz log lekin hamain
khaamosh se bhi miltay hain

Zindagi ki raahon main
Log aise miltay hain

Jaan kar bhi wo kabhi
Jaan hi na paatay hain
Pehchaan kar bhi jo kabhi
Pehchaan hi na paatay hain

Zindagi ki rahon main
Log aise miltay hain
kabhi hum khushi se miltay hain
kabhi wo kushi se miltay hain

zindagi ki rahon main...!!



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hey its really gud:)

Oh Maham ji,

YOu got to write more and more you got the stuff inside you... get it out.....

you both are so good. i was surprised........ yeh Zindgi was simply superb......wow

Post more and more please........


Diary ji, aap bhi chupe rostam hain kiya?

aik to woh shock ( smoking, that i still cant believe u for) and now this shairy?

Koyi gehri chot khayi hai kiya?

any way i enjoyed your creation...... keep it up and post here.......

And if possible write down date and time that it was created........

wow dairy or maham aap to waqai main bohat aacha likhti hain koi bhi aisa shair ya part nahi hai jo pasand na aa sakye or maham ji lagta hai aap to paki paki shaira hain main us din ka intazar karoon gi jaab aap is ko or batar bana kar kia pata aik kitaab hi likh dalien.............

yea maham aapi very nice:)well done!!so c'mon ab aap Shehzad Roy ke liye ek songki lyrics likhain plzzzzzz:) ahum wo song Shehzad bhai ko dain gey and phir bhai wo song gaaen geyyyyyy
wwwowww:D

acha sa honaa chaiyye:) waise aap acha hi likhen gi:D and haan us main Dholna bhi aana chiyye;)

WoW
when do u 2 plan on writing your own books?? this is some AmaZinG stuff!! both of u guys ...far out keep it up peeps

[quote]Originally posted by Dholna


acha sa honaa chaiyye:) waise aap acha hi likhen gi:D and haan us main Dholna bhi aana chiyye;) [/quote]
wow what a idea bara pasand aaya..

ooooohh nice idea:) but main is qaabil kahan????kia likhoon??give me an idea for that;)

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


ooooohh nice idea:) but main is qaabil kahan????kia likhoon??give me an idea for that;) [/quote]
ok new year per hi kuch likh lain.....ideas to bohat hain per dhondanye partye hain;)

hmmmmm new year:) par jab tak wo poem Shehzad Roy ke haath aay gi new year tu puraana hochuka hoga:( lolzzzzzz
koi aur koi aur:D

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


hmmmmm new year:) par jab tak wo poem Shehzad Roy ke haath aay gi new year tu puraana hochuka hoga:( lolzzzzzz
koi aur koi aur:D [/quote]
haan to phir koi romatic gazal hi kah dalo nahi to eid aa rahi hai woh phir aglye saal new year ki gazal likh dalana......

lolzzzzz.......oooo....... us ke baaray main abhi sochna paray gaaaaaa:sarc

[quote]Originally posted by Maham


lolzzzzz.......oooo....... us ke baaray main abhi sochna paray gaaaaaa:sarc [/quote]
jaldi socho kahin waqt nikal na jaye hihihihilolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz;)

kyon nahi zurrrrrrooooooooooooooooor sochti hoon na aisi bhi jaldi kia hai and u know what waqt hamesha hamaaray haath main hota hai;)

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Originally posted by Maham             kyon nahi zurrrrrrooooooooooooooooor sochti hoon na aisi bhi jaldi kia hai and u know what waqt hamesha hamaaray haath main hota hai;)

bilkul thik kaha jaldi kia hai waqt hath main hota hai likon kabhi yahi waqt hamara sath chor daita hai hum isye hamesha pakar kar nahi rakh saktye;)

okkkkkkkkkkkk
okkkkkkkkkkkkk
likh liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii:D

i have done it:)

For Shehzad Roy:) My Nazm/ghazal

Chahay koi khaab ho ya haqeeqat hi nayaab ho
Ek Dholna,ek ghazal ho aur har koi betaab ho

Hai jeet yaqeeni Shehzad Roy ki hi her jaga
Her aik ki kitaab main bus aik yehi baab ho

Aap ka andaaz har andaaz se hai khoobtar
Aap ki awaaz jaise nasha ho ya aaab ho

Dharkan_e_dil raftaar par hoti hai sab logo ki jab
Aap ki awaaz ho aur guitar par mizraab ho

Soun kar sangeet aap ka kehtay hain sab be ikhtiyar
Kaun hai jo isqadar sangeet se sairaab ho

Is hasee'n qudrat ka tohfa aap ki hai dilkashi
Aap ke chehray main jaise aks_e_mehtaab ho

Zindagi Trust liye aay bacho'n ke liyye
Jaise andheri raat main koi aagiya Aftaab ho

Kis qadar kar pao gi Maham tum unko bayaa'n
Wo tu ek heera hain jo ke har waqat nayaab ho

My Nazm/ghazal

Chahay koi khaab ho ya haqeeqat hi nayaab ho
Ek Dholna,ek ghazal ho aur har koi betaab ho

Hai jeet yaqeeni Shehzad Roy ki hi her jaga
Her aik ki kitaab main bas aik yehi baab ho

Aap ka andaaz har andaaz se hai khoobtar
Aap ki awaaz jaise nasha ho ya aaab ho

Dharkan_e_dil raftaar par hoti hai sab logo ki jab
Aap ki awaaz ho aur guitar par mizraab ho

Soun kar sangeet aap ka kehtay hain sab be ikhtiyar
Kaun hai jo isqadar sangeet se sairaab ho

Is hasee'n qudrat ka tohfa aap ki hai dilkashi
Aap ke chehray main jaise aks_e_mehtaab ho

Zindagi Trust liye aay bacho'n ke liyye
Jaise andheri raat main koi aagiya Aftaab ho

Kis qadar kar pao gi Maham tum unko bayaa'n
Wo tu ek heera hain jo ke har waqat nayaab ho

well...............i rite some poems......but ............i forgot them ....now wat i do....wat i right here..........
...i just remember this.....n ....i write it now.....just....now
kia likhhon.......
mian kia kahoon.....aur kaise kahoon......
ke tujeh bin main kitna akela hoon.......main kitna udaas hoon....
kia kahon.....k kitna mushkil hai tujhe biin jeena......
mager kia karoon................k
"Zindagi main aur bhi dukh hain Mohabbat k siwa..."
.............................
so how it is...........:sarc

hey omaer this is a nice poem!!a sad poem:(

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Originally posted by Maham             My Nazm/ghazal Chahay koi khaab ho ya haqeeqat hi nayaab ho Ek Dholna,ek ghazal ho aur har koi betaab ho Hai jeet yaqeeni Shehzad Roy ki hi her jaga Her aik ki kitaab main bas aik yehi baab ho Aap ka andaaz har andaaz se hai khoobtar Aap ki awaaz jaise nasha ho ya aaab ho Dharkan_e_dil raftaar par hoti hai sab logo ki jab Aap ki awaaz ho aur guitar par mizraab ho Soun kar sangeet aap ka kehtay hain sab be ikhtiyar Kaun hai jo isqadar sangeet se sairaab ho Is hasee'n qudrat ka tohfa aap ki hai dilkashi Aap ke chehray main jaise aks_e_mehtaab ho Zindagi Trust liye aay bacho'n ke liyye Jaise andheri raat main koi aagiya Aftaab ho Kis qadar kar pao gi Maham tum unko bayaa'n Wo tu ek heera hain jo ke har waqat nayaab ho

wow really very nice poem i think u should give any magazine b cos its relly nice kia baat hai aap shazaad ki itni bari fan hinnnnnnnnnnnn:)

thank uuuuuuuuu:)
hmmm thans am so happyyyy:D

woh to honi hi chiyeh any ways its really nice so kab sunday magazine main dai rahien hai aap ok take care
ALLAH HAFIZ

hmmmm sunday magazine main oohh i didn't know about this magazine;)
kia tum meri help karwaao gi??

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Originally posted by Maham             hey omaer this is a nice poem!!a sad poem:(

well.......thnx.........ya a sadpoem or a sad feelings......