Thanx~

yahan high quality ki shairi ho rahi hey apni daal nahi gale gi
bus ik shair apna post karoonga keh..


mey unse keh raha hoon mujhe yaad ki jiye
kabhi tu sapno mey apney bolaya ki jiye

Kuch is terha se humko yaad ki jiye
jub yaad ki jiye tu huns dia ki jiye

doosron pur ager ap Inaiyet ki jiye
tu hum pur bhi ik karum ki jiye

ik wada`e ulfet hum se bhi ki jiye
jhoota he sahi mager wada tu ki jiye

na yoon hum pe itna situm ki jiye
na yoon hum se nazrain choora ya ki jiye

gur kuch na ho sake tu itna tu ki jiye
tanhaiyon mey apni mujhe pukara ki jiye

umeed hey pasend aye gi

hamm....
this is my own poem

ik shair na kaha hay
in ankhoo main kuch hay sharab jasa
ik shair na kaha hay
in zulfoon main hay kuch khatoon jasa
ik shair na kaha hay
in batoon main hay kuch sunanay jasa
ik shair na kaha hay
is chall main hay kuch hirnoon jasa
ik shiar na kaha hay
us ke payal main hay kuch morni kaay nach jasa
ik shair na kaha hay
us kaay muskuranay main hay kuch bahar jasa
ik shair na kaha hay
us kaay gusa main hay kuch pyar jasa
ik shair na kaha hay
hamain pyar hay tum say dewanoon kay jasa

hmm ... mehfil to yahan kaafi garam lagti hai ... kuch thanda ho jaye ..

na janey wo log kaisey hein
jinkey haathoun dil majboor hai

unhi ko kyun yaad karta hai itna
kya unsey milna zaroor hai

iss shehr mein to bohat say miley hamein
kisi ko aajiz paya to koi maghroor hai

log ye jaantey nahin hein shaid
jitna tu pass aya tha ab utna hi door hai

kya khuda ki yaad mein ghafil hoga ab
zamana jaan gaya teri neeyat mein fatoor hai

ab to maan lay ke tu ussi ka ghulam hai
warna kya tu aur kya tera shaoor hai

SLAM 2 ALLL
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WOH MUJHEY DOOBARA MILL NAHI RAHI HAI AGR AAP MAIN SEY KISSI KO US LADKI KA YA POEM KA PATA HO TU PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ MUJHEY BATA DIEN ... JO MAHAM YAHAN BAHAUT SARI POEMS LIKHTI HAI YE WOH HI HAI KYA JIS NEY WOH POEM BANIYI THI JO YAHAN REGULAR AATEY HAIN UN KO TU MALOOM HO GA NA PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HELP KARIEN MERI

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WOH MUJHEY DOOBARA MILL NAHI RAHI HAI AGR AAP MAIN SEY KISSI KO US LADKI KA YA POEM KA PATA HO TU PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ MUJHEY BATA DIEN ... JO MAHAM YAHAN BAHAUT SARI POEMS LIKHTI HAI YE WOH HI HAI KYA JIS NEY WOH POEM BANIYI THI JO YAHAN REGULAR AATEY HAIN UN KO TU MALOOM HO GA NA PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HELP KARIEN MERI

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WOH MUJHEY DOOBARA MILL NAHI RAHI HAI AGR AAP MAIN SEY KISSI KO US LADKI KA YA POEM KA PATA HO TU PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ MUJHEY BATA DIEN ... JO MAHAM YAHAN BAHAUT SARI POEMS LIKHTI HAI YE WOH HI HAI KYA JIS NEY WOH POEM BANIYI THI JO YAHAN REGULAR AATEY HAIN UN KO TU MALOOM HO GA NA PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HELP KARIEN MERI

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WOH MUJHEY DOOBARA MILL NAHI RAHI HAI AGR AAP MAIN SEY KISSI KO US LADKI KA YA POEM KA PATA HO TU PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ MUJHEY BATA DIEN ... JO MAHAM YAHAN BAHAUT SARI POEMS LIKHTI HAI YE WOH HI HAI KYA JIS NEY WOH POEM BANIYI THI JO YAHAN REGULAR AATEY HAIN UN KO TU MALOOM HO GA NA PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HELP KARIEN MERI

SLAM 2 ALLL
YAR MAI NEY PHELEY BHI REQUEST KI THI KEY KISSI LADKI NEY SHYAD US KA NAAM MAHAM THA US NEY SHEHZAD ROY KEY SONGS KI EK POEM BANIY THI
WOH MUJHEY DOOBARA MILL NAHI RAHI HAI AGR AAP MAIN SEY KISSI KO US LADKI KA YA POEM KA PATA HO TU PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ MUJHEY BATA DIEN ... JO MAHAM YAHAN BAHAUT SARI POEMS LIKHTI HAI YE WOH HI HAI KYA JIS NEY WOH POEM BANIYI THI JO YAHAN REGULAR AATEY HAIN UN KO TU MALOOM HO GA NA PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HELP KARIEN MERI

SLAM 2 ALLL
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WOH MUJHEY DOOBARA MILL NAHI RAHI HAI AGR AAP MAIN SEY KISSI KO US LADKI KA YA POEM KA PATA HO TU PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ PLZZ MUJHEY BATA DIEN ... JO MAHAM YAHAN BAHAUT SARI POEMS LIKHTI HAI YE WOH HI HAI KYA JIS NEY WOH POEM BANIYI THI JO YAHAN REGULAR AATEY HAIN UN KO TU MALOOM HO GA NA PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ HELP KARIEN MERI

AB SHYAD AAP LOGON KO MERI REQUEST NAZAR AAJYE
AGAR MAHAM JO YAHAN POST KARTI HAI AGAR TUM WOH HI HO
JIS NEY YE POEM LIKHI THI TU TUM KO SHEHZAD ROY KI KASAM DE DO NA WOH POEM

hey guys this is my first try at this shayari(inspired by this forum ):

Itna mohabbat ka nasha tha
Kis kis ka sar kalam kiya
Yeh mehsoos hi nahin howa

Jab dhund oothi to nazara yeh tha
Apna hi sar kadmon may para dekha.

shukriya...

oh great yaar
u have a nice sence of shairi
keep it up

thanks sajjad..i know its a bit immature but i appreciate the compliment

this is my first ever poem or watever u call it that i wrote.
yup i wrote this damn thing. pata nahi kese. words kept coming and i kept writing. i posted it as a separate thread. then i didnt know there was this special thread. sorry about that. i dont come to poetry. thats why. here it goes.

Did it ever occur
that u were hurting someone
but u didnt know.
The person tried to talk to u and show his feelings
He tried to tell u that he wanted to be more than a friend
And u were all laughs.
Started to treat him as if he were a fool,
ignoring him, pushing him around.
Never knowing wat was going on in his mind.

But now that u've actually fallen for someone,
and that "one" is doing to u what u once did to someone.
u realize how u were wrong all along
u realize how u hurt someone before
u realize the feelings he would have had when u were treating him like dirt
And u still dont find urself at fault,
cuz u never had any intentions of hurting anyone.
But nothing can be done now
cuz he is now long gone. :

Losing someone doesnt hurt as much as hurting a friend.
Now that u want to apologize,
no one is there to forgive u
You try to be happy, try to smile.
You have family and friends who got expectations
who think of u as a happy, jolly girl.
But u just cant get it over with
Sometimes just thinking of it all brings tears to ur eyes
You want to forget it all but memories keep coming back
Crying at nights becomes a habit.
You promise urself to start all over again
But there is so much heartache and pain
after realizing how u were wrong all along
and u thought u were never wrong
But now with hopes all gone
and not knowing wats going on
nothing to fear any more
cuz he is now long gone...

written by me

kis sey shikwa ho kis sey shakayat;

mujh ko kahan ley aye yeh chahat;

woh khushi sari woh rang sare;

sub mit gaye hein sub loot gaye hein;

na woh mein rahi na woh tum rahe;

sub kuut gaye hein sub buut gaye hein;

mere khuda yeh kya ho gaya hai;

sub khatam hua sub kho gaya hai;



ub mien jeeti hoon na marti hoon;

khud sey rooz rooz larti hoon;

mera andar har baar kehta hai;

keh mein pyar sirf aik ussi sey karti hoon;

mere khuda yeh kya ho gaya hai;

mere kis gunaah ka aisa silaa hai;



woh lafz sare woh bol sare;

tu upne tarazoo mein tol sare;

na woh lafz jhote na woh bol jhote;

hein lamhein tere saath key anmol sare;



tu phir mere khuda yeh kya ho gaya hai;

mere dard ki kya dawa hai;

mujh ko bula ley tu yahi dua hai;



na woh mein rahoon gin na woh chahat rahe gi;

na shikwah rahe gaa na shikayat rahe gi;

ankh ka pani sukhana tou dou
jo ho chuka naheen usse bet jane to dou
jo sitam tum ney hum per dhaye hain naheen
un ghamon ki haein pee jane to dou
tummhari yadon mein laho tak bah gaye mere
tum aye hou tou dil ko dharak jane to dou
tummhari zulf ki chhaon jaisee chhaon kaheen hai hee naheen
tere lab ki nazuki kissi phoole mein bhee hai hee naheen
aisa jo tera shabab hai usse hamara hee ban janay tou dou
tu jo na mila tou jeetey jee mer jaonga mein
maut aaye na aaye mujhey phir bhe mer jane tou dou
jee ker dekha hia mer kay dekhoonga
jo aaj tak kya hai naheen woh zaroor ker kay dekhoonga
teri yad mein hans ker dekhoonga
hai yeh na mumkin magar koshish ker kay dekhoonga
doosron per hai kya bharosa mein ne
tou tujhey bhee azma ker dekhoonga
hai tu be wafa,yeh sab kehtey hain mujh ko
magar phir bhee tujjh ko azma ker dekhoonga
kehta hoon apne doston ko kay hoga be shak be wafa woh
magar dil kay behlane kay isse azmane tou dou
hota hai apni hee mohobbat kay hathon be wajaee ka maza kaisa
maut se pehely mujhey bhee chakh janey tou dou
ankh ka pani sukhane tou dou
jo ho chuka naheen usse beet janay tou dou


well do u like it pplz tell me if u do:S

tell me plz as i m new in this poetry thing is it good or not and check mine sextion too as i like the poetry now send ur poetry to my sextion thanks

kaise bataon mai tumhay mere liye tum kon ho.....


maham.... ur first poem is impressed by or theft by ....
NANA PATIKAR....lolzzz

DAT WAS GOOD... WOW..

aankhon se jub koi aansoo tapka to
teri muhabbat ke do pal bhi doob gayee

dunno if i posted it b4 or not!

Nice diarY ..


Saans Ruke To Ruk Jaaye ..
Bass Dil Na Kissi Ka Bhar Aaye ..
Khushian Saari Baant Do Sabko ..
Chahe Apne Liyeh Bass Dukh Aaye ..

aj nafrat hai tujhay meri in hi batoun say
kel tuq jo teray DIL ka asasa theen

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laboun per tera naam dil main teri muhabat
teri ajj bhi hai hum ko pehli si hi chahat

DOM

hi diary!!how are you???tumhaari diary tu bohut achi hai!!i means tumhaari shairy ki diary!!!hmmmm!!!!
soo nice!!!!

hey Maham!
how r u sweety?
im ok
thanx for liking
wussup wid u?
u dont come here no more
bz?

Dil ko jalane waley
teri kabar pe na aaoon kabhi

aaj tak tera diya hua dard
mujhe chubhta hai

sumone continue from here coz i cant think...bah

2 stanzas by DiaryofMatrix:

teri hur baat meray dil main
ik niya chaid kerti ha

ratoun ko teri yaad may main
ik bechain rooh kiterha bhatukti houn

i jus worte one....i ono if its good or not..here it goes..

ey merey dil ko sataney walei,
meri need mein ahnei walei,
merey khawabo mein samaaney walei
yeh dil tera intazaar ker raha hein,
jab tu aye, meri anhkho mein sei tera pyar jaag jei
aur jab tu dooor jei yeh dil terey pei kurbaan ho jei

Hey diary how are u?i am fine!u know there was some prob with my net but now its ok so ab mai often aaoon gi and apni shairi bhi likhoon gi!!u know main ne is arsay main kaafi poems likhi hain

we'll b waiting honey


post em in individual threads okay
coz i dunt open this thread that frequently

ankh ka pani sukhana tou dou
jo ho chuka naheen usse bet jane to dou
jo sitam tum ney hum per dhaye hain naheen
un ghamon ki haein pee jane to dou
tummhari yadon mein laho tak bah gaye mere
tum aye hou tou dil ko dharak jane to dou
tummhari zulf ki chhaon jaisee chhaon kaheen hai hee naheen
tere lab ki nazuki kissi phoole mein bhee hai hee naheen
aisa jo tera shabab hai usse hamara hee ban janay tou dou
tu jo na mila tou jeetey jee mer jaonga mein
maut aaye na aaye mujhey phir bhe mer jane tou dou
jee ker dekha hia mer kay dekhoonga
jo aaj tak kya hai naheen woh zaroor ker kay dekhoonga
teri yad mein hans ker dekhoonga
hai yeh na mumkin magar koshish ker kay dekhoonga
doosron per hai kya bharosa mein ne
tou tujhey bhee azma ker dekhoonga
hai tu be wafa,yeh sab kehtey hain mujh ko
magar phir bhee tujjh ko azma ker dekhoonga
kehta hoon apne doston ko kay hoga be shak be wafa woh
magar dil kay behlane kay isse azmane tou dou
hota hai apni hee mohobbat kay hathon be wajaee ka maza kaisa
maut se pehely mujhey bhee chakh janey tou dou
ankh ka pani sukhane tou dou
jo ho chuka naheen usse beet janay tou dou



hmm hope u all like it its on section hi pppzl share ur.............

makes no snesce but i wrote it just rite now

hanste hue , garajhte badloon se nikli woh
cham cham karke payal , meethi si dhun bana gai woh

apne haathon mein mehndi lagaye, apna aanchal lehraye
baarish mein bheegi hui, apne komal haathon se baloon ko chuti hui

mere dil ke mehil mein aa bheti...
kapkapaye hoontoon aur jhuki paloon se kehne lagi

apne ghar ka rasta bhool gai
jo uss ka kehna shrama sharma ke

pari ki moorat lagti thi
uss ke tasveer-e-tasoorvor bhi mere andar hal chal macha deyta tha

jo ek hawa ka jhonka aaya mere ankhin khul gai
dhundhal ankhoon se deekha maine to yeh sab ek khuwaab ban ke reh gaya

awww... thtz shoo shweet@shy_grrl...
good job!...

Hey Diaryy!!how are you??i am fine!!So kis thread main post karoon??please tell me ok!!!

very nice shygirl!!!Welldone !!go on!

hey check ur PM
werna abhee spamming ka FATWA lug jayee ga
haha

thx ashi and maham

my poem, it makes no sense but i wrote it

The Pretty BirD..

Standing By The Window, I Stop To Think
Oh What Lucky Are Those Little Things,
Across The River Up The Sky,
Look, I Can see The Pretty Birds Fly..
They Fly In a Flock With Their Loving Families..
And Are Sure Of Their Destiny!
No Sorrow, No Fear Do they Have On their Mind..
Look How Free, How Free They Fly..
The Song Of Love Together They Sing..
And Never Let Go Off Their Partner’s wings..

Madiha~

LAB-E-NAAZUK KAY BAARAY MAIn

ARZ KIYA HAI

LAB-E -NAAZUK KI BAAT KERTAY HOYE

MEER NAY ISS TARAH KAHAA THHA KABHI ---------MEER TAQI MEER

"NAAZUKI OSKAY LAB KI KYA KAH -YE

PANKHDI EK GULAAB KI SI HAI"


BAAT YEH MEER KI BHI SUCH HOGI

PER YEH OSS DAUR KI HIKAAYAT HAI

JAB KAY LABB PHOOL JAISAY HOTAY THHAY


MEER GER AAJ HO RAHAY HOTAY

APNAY MISRAY WOH YOUn BADAL DAYTAY


PHOOL KI PANKHDI HASEEn HAI BOHAT

PANKHDI MAIn BADI NAZAAKAT HAI

PANKHDI TERAY HONT KI SI HAI

PANKHDI TERAY LAB SAY MILTI HAI

PHOOL YEH SAB KAY SAB GULAABOOn KAY

YEH TERAY HI DA-HAN KAY JAISAY HAIn

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CHALKAAA KAY JAAM - JHOOM JHOOOM JHOOOOM

arz kiya hai..this is my own poem...so kindly tell me about my try...
kaise kahoon
kaise kahoon ke tum se payar hai
kaise kahoon ke tum hi meri jaan ho
kaise kahoon ke nahi jee sekta hoon tum bin
kaise kahoon ke main adhoora hoon
kaise kahoon ke nahi jiya jata
bin tere
main kuch bhi nahi kuch bhi nahi
bin tere

sorry... i 'm not a poet....

so dont have my own poetry...

but i like to read poetry....

u guyz r doin very well.... keep it up....

thanks pakishan.....

shair parh lete hain yehi bohat hai.... ab time nikaal kar likhna yeh tou bohat hi zabardast baat hai lekin hum kahan is qabil......... hats off to u peeps --- keep it up!!!

I just noticed this thread.... wow some of u ppl do have some great poetry
I write too in English..I got this blue diary that I write in and keep it under my pillow..no ones read them yet....apart from the few that I typed out on my signature...

I dont know much urdu poetry apart from one that my cousin told me in Pakistan which was...

Kash harr aadhmi keh do dill hote..
Jab aik toot jatah pyar meh..
Phir aik hota jeenay meh...

Well it went something like that....

here is something that I wrote a while while back....enjoy

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